Comments on: ~Bonus for Bloggers! #4~ http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/ Stay in the Loop for 7th Grade Language Arts and Reading! Thu, 03 Dec 2009 00:18:45 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Ms. Scott http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-268 Ms. Scott Wed, 13 May 2009 14:24:45 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-268 Ok - most of you had trouble meeting all 3 criteria... a cinquain has 5 lines, with 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, syllables per line, respectively. the 1st and 5th lines were to rhyme with each other (A), and the 2nd and 4th (B). And each line was to have some alliteration. Here is an example of a poem meeting all the criteria: running sweaty soothing timing tiring tough stay steady and strong from the start road race (submitted by Olivia Ruark) Ok – most of you had trouble meeting all 3 criteria… a cinquain has 5 lines, with 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, syllables per line, respectively. the 1st and 5th lines were to rhyme with each other (A), and the 2nd and 4th (B).
And each line was to have some alliteration. Here is an example of a poem meeting all the criteria:

running
sweaty soothing
timing tiring tough
stay steady and strong from the start
road race

(submitted by Olivia Ruark)

]]> By: Natalie http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-267 Natalie Wed, 13 May 2009 12:14:30 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-267 AHH!! I did my poem at school yesterday and i turned it in, but somehow i forgot that the last line needs 2 sylobels (spelling?)...and you said i could retype it. But, i didnt write it down =[ soo can i change the first word to Ocean and Last word to Motion? Sorry =\. See you 5th period. Thanks, Natalie AHH!! I did my poem at school yesterday and i turned it in, but somehow i forgot that the last line needs 2 sylobels (spelling?)…and you said i could retype it. But, i didnt write it down =[ soo can i change the first word to Ocean and Last word to Motion? Sorry =\. See you 5th period.
Thanks, Natalie

]]> By: Tony Yu http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-266 Tony Yu Wed, 13 May 2009 02:03:28 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-266 There is a wooden house, Fill with dust. then someone clean the dust, which caused fust. popped out a dirty mouse. There is a wooden house,
Fill with dust.
then someone clean the dust,
which caused fust.
popped out a dirty mouse.

]]> By: Nathaniel Maggio http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-265 Nathaniel Maggio Wed, 13 May 2009 01:33:01 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-265 Baseball Nation's pastime Running, catching, hitting Playing with the best of the best Awesome Baseball
Nation’s pastime
Running, catching, hitting
Playing with the best of the best
Awesome

]]> By: Aaliyah Jones http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-264 Aaliyah Jones Wed, 13 May 2009 00:45:03 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-264 Snowman Collective,cheerful,chubby crafty constructors Waiting, winking, welcoming windy wonders Cascading cold covered crystally clusters Sensations of Snowmen Snowman
Collective,cheerful,chubby crafty
constructors
Waiting, winking, welcoming windy wonders
Cascading cold covered crystally clusters
Sensations of Snowmen

]]> By: Will Jackson http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-263 Will Jackson Tue, 12 May 2009 20:31:21 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-263 Baseball Fun, hard Hitting, pitching, fielding Catching the ball can win them all. Great Baseball
Fun, hard
Hitting, pitching, fielding
Catching the ball can win them all.
Great

]]> By: Emily Moushikhian http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-262 Emily Moushikhian Tue, 12 May 2009 20:20:04 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-262 Here's my cinquain: cheering so powering stunting, tumbling, and trust so much more fun that just learning winning Here’s my cinquain:

cheering
so powering
stunting, tumbling, and trust
so much more fun that just learning
winning

]]> By: Michael Oram http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-261 Michael Oram Tue, 12 May 2009 19:41:30 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-261 Hockey Intense, hardcore Shooting, passing, hitting Best game on planet Fight Hockey
Intense, hardcore
Shooting, passing, hitting
Best game on planet
Fight

]]> By: Steven Reale http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-260 Steven Reale Tue, 12 May 2009 19:39:55 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-260 baseball fun,awsome hitting,throwing,running you can chew gum brawl baseball
fun,awsome
hitting,throwing,running
you can chew gum
brawl

]]> By: Steven Reale http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/2009/05/07/bonus-for-bloggers-4/comment-page-1/#comment-259 Steven Reale Tue, 12 May 2009 19:35:56 +0000 http://scottsspot.edublogs.org/?p=324#comment-259 Baseball fun,awsome throwing,running,hitting you can chew some gum brawl Baseball
fun,awsome
throwing,running,hitting
you can chew some gum
brawl

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