Ms. Scott's Spot for School Whatnot

At the top of the hill was a little old house
no one lived there untill the Reds
they were a very different family
the oldest was fred
who brought his pet mouse

My magnificant, mighty mother
Just jousted in jacksinville
While waiting for willy the whale
That illiterate ipod made her ill
The bees in the back did bother

The sneaky, spooky, staircase
is above the abandoned attic
while weakly walking to my doom
I abrutly ajusted my step automaticly
I didn’t want to die be driving at this slow pace

school.
long,busy
working, teaching, boring,
education what im made,
northwestern

Beach
Dark, deep waves
Rageing,rapid waves crash
Hence the horizon and deep caves
reach

baseball
the players game
running around the bases
the players only and final games
baseball

Kindheartedly my body you embrace;
Eternally you give your soul to me.
Voluptuously you lend me yourself
In spirit with excitement and such glee.
No person in my life can take your place.

College
Freedom, Playing
I cant wait to be in College
Loving, Tanning
Knowledge

Baseball
fun,awsome
throwing,running,hitting
you can chew some gum
brawl

baseball
fun,awsome
hitting,throwing,running
you can chew gum
brawl

Hockey
Intense, hardcore
Shooting, passing, hitting
Best game on planet
Fight

Here’s my cinquain:

cheering
so powering
stunting, tumbling, and trust
so much more fun that just learning
winning

Baseball
Fun, hard
Hitting, pitching, fielding
Catching the ball can win them all.
Great

Snowman
Collective,cheerful,chubby crafty
constructors
Waiting, winking, welcoming windy wonders
Cascading cold covered crystally clusters
Sensations of Snowmen

Baseball
Nation’s pastime
Running, catching, hitting
Playing with the best of the best
Awesome

There is a wooden house,
Fill with dust.
then someone clean the dust,
which caused fust.
popped out a dirty mouse.

AHH!! I did my poem at school yesterday and i turned it in, but somehow i forgot that the last line needs 2 sylobels (spelling?)…and you said i could retype it. But, i didnt write it down =[ soo can i change the first word to Ocean and Last word to Motion? Sorry =\. See you 5th period.
Thanks, Natalie

Ok – most of you had trouble meeting all 3 criteria… a cinquain has 5 lines, with 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, syllables per line, respectively. the 1st and 5th lines were to rhyme with each other (A), and the 2nd and 4th (B).
And each line was to have some alliteration. Here is an example of a poem meeting all the criteria:

running
sweaty soothing
timing tiring tough
stay steady and strong from the start
road race

(submitted by Olivia Ruark)